One cold tear

One cold tear

A Poem by lachebekje
"

I could finally cry, after a very long time...

"

A tear, running down my cheek.

Im not sure why, but i can finally cry.

After one whole year.

i finally get to lose one tear.

But why is it so cold?

© 2009 lachebekje


Author's Note

lachebekje
it sometimes accidently rhymed, it isnt meant to rhyme though.

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't Is net een haiku. Mooi geschreven. Maar je moet wel aan je grammar werken, dan leest alles veel makkelijker. Hier is het niet zo erg, maar bij andere gedichten van je moet je wel oppassen. Maar je hebt wel talent, zeker voor een veertienjarige. I'm impressed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


it's nice, at least it's not about death, this time

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 6, 2009
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lachebekje
lachebekje

Netherlands



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I'm a 14 year old boy, im from the Netherlands so i'm sorry if my grammar is bad, a friend made me come here and i'm happy she did. I think different then most other people but i'm not a person who ha.. more..

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