When your about to fly away.

When your about to fly away.

A Poem by lachebekje
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It's about the last moments of life.

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When you are about to die, when you have just this little time left. You start to think about your life, about what you have done and what you acomplished. You finally realize that life was just here to be taken away from you. You where just here for no reason, nothing is. You did so much effort you tried to make the best out of everything. You loved, you cried, you saw death with your own eyes. Now your going to experience it, you will be free, no more rules to follow, no more suffering that you have to take. Death is no suffering, its a gate to freedom. Your free, you can fly away now, your death.

© 2009 lachebekje


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lachebekje
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I like...its a lovely poem
Great Job

Posted 15 Years Ago


I think it was beautiful :)
"Your free, you can fly away now" is a beautiful line
lovely write :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 25, 2009
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lachebekje
lachebekje

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I'm a 14 year old boy, im from the Netherlands so i'm sorry if my grammar is bad, a friend made me come here and i'm happy she did. I think different then most other people but i'm not a person who ha.. more..

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