Alone

Alone

A Poem by laceyjane23
"

the biggest sacrifice in love...is being alone.

"
 
 
You tell me that you love me...
you tell me that you care.
 
It's hard for me to believe these things...
because you're never there.
 
You always have a reason...
for why you are not home.
 
You always have a reason...
for leaving me all alone.
 
I remember every "sorry"...
that you ever said.
 
Every broken promise...
always running through my head.
 
What exactly is it...
thats keeping you away?
 
When I gave you my heart...
you promised it would be o.k.
 
I try to understand...
and I am always here for you.
 
But will you ever realize...
that I need you too?
 
Is it me you think about...
when you're out at night?
 
I think about the many times...
we've tried to make this right.
 
I don't know if we'll work this out...
will we even pull through?
 
I have given you all my heart...
all my love to you.
 
I have nothing left to give you...
my emotions are tapped out.
 
I am tired of all the things...
that make us scream and shout.
 
Do you think I won't leave...
no matter what you do?
 
How much is this relationship...
my love worth to you?
 
You know that I love you...
each and every step of the way.
 
You may not think about this now...
but I know you will someday.
 
I just hope you realize this...
before it is too late.
 
Is there still a chance for us...
or have you sealed our fate?
 
I know there will come a day...
when your love's fully grown.
 
I hope that day comes soon...
before you're all alone.

© 2008 laceyjane23


Author's Note

laceyjane23
please ignore all spelling and punctuation errors. fighting for your love is hard feeling like you're fighting for it alone.. is the hardest feeling of all.

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This was unbelievable. I had tears forming in my eyes, it was so beautiful. Damned that man u speak about. How dare he do this to you >:( Unacceptable for what he's done. All of the love and hard work that u have already put into this relationship, he doesnt do a damn thing (he doesnt even see you, either) >:( Unacceptable. Hun, plz be careful of this. I can relate to everything here. Plz be careful. Dont put or pour ur whole heart out to somone that does not want to even try to keep it. U deserve so much better, i swear. Sorry bout my harsh words, i really apologize hehe. It's just when i hear these words from a woman, any woman, whose been let down, abused, or taken advantaged of; my heart just collapses, and it just makes me so mad that these crazy guys would do such things to their women. Just makes me sick. I felt this so much, really i did. It touched me in many places. I feel for you so much, and im so sorry ur going thru such an ordeal. Ur beautiful, and u deserve a 'loving soul.' :)

Bravo to you :)

B.A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This was unbelievable. I had tears forming in my eyes, it was so beautiful. Damned that man u speak about. How dare he do this to you >:( Unacceptable for what he's done. All of the love and hard work that u have already put into this relationship, he doesnt do a damn thing (he doesnt even see you, either) >:( Unacceptable. Hun, plz be careful of this. I can relate to everything here. Plz be careful. Dont put or pour ur whole heart out to somone that does not want to even try to keep it. U deserve so much better, i swear. Sorry bout my harsh words, i really apologize hehe. It's just when i hear these words from a woman, any woman, whose been let down, abused, or taken advantaged of; my heart just collapses, and it just makes me so mad that these crazy guys would do such things to their women. Just makes me sick. I felt this so much, really i did. It touched me in many places. I feel for you so much, and im so sorry ur going thru such an ordeal. Ur beautiful, and u deserve a 'loving soul.' :)

Bravo to you :)

B.A.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This was sad but really a great write. I can understand this.. And fighting for love is the hardest thing a person can do...

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 6, 2008

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Mesa, AZ



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Well lets see, I am 28 yrs old, and i love to write. I write poetry, lyrics, stories, articles, and I am currently working on my first book, and it has been quite an experience! I love life and I beli.. more..

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