Just One Day

What would you do if you had just one day with someone you loved?

Just one day

 

If I had just one day to share with you...

I would say everything I needed to say.

I would tell you a joke,Just to hear you laugh. (so full of joy)

If I only had one day.

 

If I had just one day to share with you...

I would remember the simple things.

I would play your favorite song,

Just to hear you sing. ( to always remember your sound)

If I only had one day.

 

If I had just one day to share with you...

I would memorize your entire face. ( every line, every freckle)

For in a corner of my mind would it be traced.

If I only had one day.

 

If I had just one day to share with you...

I would run my fingers through your hair, until you fell asleep.

Making new memories to keep. (locked in my heart)

If I only had one day.

 

If I had just one day to share with you...

I would admire your every perfection.

Tell you never to change a thing.

I would tell you all the ways you have touched my soul.

How your mere presence makes me whole. (your light shines)

If I only had one day.

 

If I had just one day to share with you...

I would hug you ever so tight.

I would forgive your every mistake.

Do anything to make it right. (never enough time)

If I only had one day.

 

If I had just one day to share with you...

I would take you to your favorite place. (anywhere)

"I love you" are words I would never forget to say.

If I had just one day.

Author's Note

please ignore all grammar and punctuation errors.

Reviews

[Joy C]

So touching...
If this piece is read out loud to whoever it is dedicated to, I am sure that the person will be moved to tears.
That guy is so lucky, I yearn for someone to love me so earnestly too. A beautiful and elegant piece.
As far as I can tell (with my bad grammar...), there's no mistakes.
I like it~!!

[ShadowWolf]

Whomever you wrote this for is one extremely lucky individual! You make the reader feel every bit of the love.

[DRIVEN]

Beautiful tribute to your loved one...and beautifully written...

If we all only lived in the moment and recognized the gifts we have,,,not the gifts we want..

Thank you for starting my day with the correct perspective:)