Rock You!

Rock You!

A Poem by laceyjane23
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A song I wrote for anyone who was not in the "it" group in high school, One day you will have a chance to show em all how fabulous you are, they will be rocked!

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Well do you remember me?

Way back in high school.

I'm not who I used to be.

Thought you were so cool.

 

 

Remember what you used to say.

Always hanging out with your boys.

Did you think I would just fade away?

And forget about all your noise.

 

 

Oh, Oh, Oh

 

 

Used to call me strange

Cause I wasn't in your crew

But thats all gonna change,

Cause tonight I'm gonna rock you!

 

 

Rock you.... Yeah.....Rock You!

 

 

Yeah.. Tonight I'm gonna rock you!

 

 

 

Oh way back in the day,

You thought I was such a bore.

Didn't care what I had to say

But I was always keeping score.

 

 

Oh, Oh, Oh

 

 

Used to call me strange

Cause I wasn't in your crew.

But thats all gonna change,

Cause tonight I'm gonna rock you!

 

 

Rock you.... Yeah... Rock You!

 

 

Yeah... Tonight I'm gonna rock you!

 

 

Sure go ahead, buy me a drink.

Cause you like what you see.

But really its not what you think,

Your not getting anywhere with me!!

 

 

Oh, Oh, Oh,

 

 

Used to call me strange

Cause I wasn't in your crew

Now thats all gonna change,

Cause Tonight I'm gonna rock you!

 

 

Rock you... Yeah... Rock You!

 

 

Oh, Tonight I'm Gonna Rock You!!

© 2008 laceyjane23


Author's Note

laceyjane23
please ignore all grammar and punctuation errors, it is my first draft of this song, it needs some work, i am open to suggestions.

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I'd like to hear the music behind this, then I could really make a judgement. When music and lyrics blend well, it's sublime! (the feeling and the band haha)

Love the message, here. But, I've found that most people grow up after high school, so usually I'd forgive them instead of rock them :-)

Have a nice day!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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good lyrics, definitely could hear some music in my head for this piece :D just wait till you waste your time going to a high school reunion lol yea i said "waste your time" lol

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this poem! Truly artistic and beautiful! Payback is alays a bitc............!
Keep writing from your soul for the good of all!
TIM

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love this!! It is so awesome.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love it. Rock em girl. ^_^ You could try and make a more defiining ending and a defined bridge. Agian try. I love it ^_^. You really can hear the song being sung while you read it. ^^

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely love this.......music is such a passion in my life, I could literally hear the music as I read it, although it was probably not the same music that was inside you as you wrote it. So many of us can relate to these words! Thanks for sharing it! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'd like to hear the music behind this, then I could really make a judgement. When music and lyrics blend well, it's sublime! (the feeling and the band haha)

Love the message, here. But, I've found that most people grow up after high school, so usually I'd forgive them instead of rock them :-)

Have a nice day!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Love it! Love it! Love it! I can hear Pink, Avril Lavigne, Kelly Clarkson...singing this song! Excellent song! Rock on!!

Mary

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this.
Im a sophmore in highschool right now that this is hella inparational
Yes indeed.
Grea job.


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I have so been there... This will make a great song... A definite Rocker!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really loved this. And I'd love to hear it put to music.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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laceyjane23

Mesa, AZ



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Well lets see, I am 28 yrs old, and i love to write. I write poetry, lyrics, stories, articles, and I am currently working on my first book, and it has been quite an experience! I love life and I beli.. more..

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