I Just Want You To Know

A song i wrote for my husband shortly after we were married, just to let him know that even when i have bad days he's still the man of my dreams.

Please don't ask me what is wrong,

don't ask if I'm alright.

The last thing I wanna do,

is start another fight.

 

Right now I'm feeling kinda down,

and love is hard to show.

I just need to be alone,

but I just want you to know

 

This is not what it seems,

your still the man of my dreams.

This is not my goodbye,

sometimes I just need to cry.

 

Oh baby for you anywhere I'd go

I just want you to know.

 

This isn't because of you,

I'm just having a bad day.

Don't want to bring you down,

so it's best I stay away.

 

This is not what it seems,

your still the man of my dreams.

This is not my goodbye,

sometimes I just need to cry.

 

Oh baby for you anywhere I'd go,

I just want you to know.

 

Oh baby I just need to be alone..

But I just want you to know.

Author's Note

please ignore grammar and punctuation errors its the content thats important.

Reviews

[None]

Another hit song here with unique subject matter that would be really fresh as a song. I am moved by the emotions and know the feeling of having a bad day. I like how you let him know...
..."This isn't because of you,
I'm just having a bad day.
Don't want to bring you down,
so it's best I stay away."
Great rhyme and flow here and this would sound awesome to music. Excellent poem.

[BenightedWhispers]

Awww how kawaii. Very nice.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This isn't anything I'd be able to relate to, but it's a real nice idea what true love is like. ^^ ...That's pretty much all can say-- Oh! Excellent job! I'm sure your husband loved it. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Sarah]

This is such a sweet poem & truely touches upon the hard truth that sometimes it's best to be away from someone in order to really appreciate how much you love them. You don't need to constantly be with someone to have a successful relationship, and you show that in this poem - love can survive even through hardships! =) Great job!

[Angel's Lady]

Oh baby for you anywhere I'd go,
I just want you to know.

I guess that summed it up quite nicely.

[Staci Brown]

this is a really sweet song for your husband hon! :D i can totally understand how you feel in this too. i think pretty much anyone in a good loving relationship will relate to your song as well. :D nicely done :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)