Erosion

Heritage of wounded trees
Songs of melodic woods
Contrasting tensions are in cold wind


Subjects for altruistic art in earth
Mentions of determinate shapes
Unconcrete emptiness of snow


Gasoline smokes are violent
In living diversity of nature
Promising grounds are dying


Reasons aare castrating
Throbing cosmos of moon lands
Deranged silence of solstice


Emotional abstractive desolations
Apathic weeping of child
Erosions are moving across the mind


Tornaments of dying lives
In ashes of Joshua and Judas
Euphoric waves are false

Reviews

[Chris]

The window panes face out in both directions... yet only show what a mind sees.

[John the Baptist]

The bleakness of the images in this offering paint a dark picture of life. It is almost like a journey through the mind of a clinically depressed person. The last line gives a hint of bipolar disorder. I hope that's not the case.