Bullet at wall

Dark line in last call
A suicide
In mind of poetic crime
Crimson cold




Wishing within midnight
In death of living dream
Cold-sleep-gun-real-
Smoking barrel in kerosene



Paradise in midnight bullet
Learning of schemes
In adults failure
Frist midnight of decision



1 Hour of focusing
Collecting
Empathy-sympathy
In death body of unnamed

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

There is such a sad morbidity to this freeverse piece as the protagonist seems to struggle with the concept of life and suicide!

[Wayfaring stranger]

Thanks again for visit and leaving comment. Poem was developed during the 6 re writing. I just feel this uncertainy of protagonist fit right into mood of this poem .