Scandinavian passion

Island is on surface of light
Lonely boat and women in white
Cold black stones are around shore
Sounds of birds --under--sea--


Fiction weather--fire---rain--
Sorrowful---screen---play
Inside of broken judgement
Martydom is Europe soul


Passion for Liv-Ulman
Cold-stone-death-island
Existencial-pregnancy
Stabing-throbbing-suffering-



Cosmos of naked light
A letter of admirations
Impresionistic word of art
Persona in shame of passion heart

Reviews

[Eilis]

This feels very intense- like it’s summing up a mountain’s worth of emotional content, or the development of humanity’s soul. It has a quality like myth, but also like one’s own narrative and that mixture, for me, makes the poem feel very rich.

The ‘lonely boat and woman in white’ makes me think of a last person left alive scenario. I always wonder about those kinds of things. I think people tend to wonder if a single human can go on alone. Perhaps there is a need to believe we are resilient enough to triumph, but without miracles or time travel, the eventual finality will deliver itself.

I’m not sure where that came from, ha. The poem’s spirit, I think, led me down that path of thought, though I feel certain that is not what the poem is about. There are hidden triggers in the poem that initiate certain pictures in my mind. It makes the short poem feel as complete as a novel, to me.

A poem I would keep reading over. Great work.

[Wayfaring stranger]

Thank you again for deep coment. This p[oem have kind of 2 parts. In beggining i wanted to write about island like metaphor-symbol for human mind. That lonely boat is losted dream and women in white is symbol for hope and reborn. During the writing this island became place for dramatic events and there is come in inspiration from Ingmar Bergman . My favourite movies of his creation take place on that lonely island. Liv Ulman was frist women what i saw naked at movie. She represent for femine and secrecy of love.


I like your intrepration cause thats probably true too. Our soulf will relive when we let all go and write down in our own desires and joys.