The danec

Raining on the shoes
Steps are melodic
Why don't you dance

Reviews

[IWAZHERE]

perfect how well these three simple lines display a scene.
Not a single word seems out of place.
This is one of my favorite short poems I have read on this site.

In the title, did you mean "dance"?

[Wayfaring stranger]

Thank you very much. My short poems are usually rewritten like 6 or 7 times. I want to be,quiet precise. Yes I mean it dance. I was,walked in rain drops and it was quiet like walking in music. So why we don't dance.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A short and sweet piece that begs the question that those with little else to worry about still are moribund in fear?

[Wayfaring stranger]

Thanks for all your reviews, I will be react on each one. I am not actually good in giving reviews or response on reviews but I try my best. I like how you see some different meaning then is mine. Cause it give me more diversity for my writing. This piem.is very simple it was raining like at musical so I was,wondering why people don't dance.