Sunday,s raining afternoon

Dirty donut in wet soil
Umbrella is atacking my head
Crows are dancing in rain drops
My wife have lucky brake

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I really love this until the final line. That line simply disaggregated the whole thing and I still don't know why?

[Wayfaring stranger]

That last line is ironic cause my wife today have very bad day. Thanks for comment.