Chapter 1A Chapter by Luc HunterNovember 7 1979Wednesday11.00 pmMassive rain was running. A black Ford Mondeo (car) stopped in front of an abandon dark as night building. The car door opened and a women about mid twenties with long brown hair tied in a bun wearing skin tight grey jeans with black boots and button up shirt holding a black hand bag came out. She pulled out a dark colored umbrella from her car. The opposite side of car , door opened and a man about two years older than her with dark brown hair styled in long middle and short in sides wearing dark blue shirt with sleeves rolled up till elbow with skinny black tie and black pants came out and leather shoes . They walked towards the creepy entrance of the abandon building. "Nothing is wrong here Lou", said the women inspecting the entrance."It does seems like rain never stops here", said Lou sitting on his one knee and scanning the soil between his slender fingers which were protected by plastic gloves , he then audited the moonless sky where the inky clouds poured a waterfall . "I don't get it, how come there is no evidence?, The killer always leave the evidence", thought the women. Lou pushed the door but it didn't respond. "The door is locked", he said. Then he kicked the door by using his right leg. The lock broke and it opened with squeaky noise. He pushed down the switch making the circuit complete to turn on the lights. One by one immediately the tubes lights created the rays of shallow bright light. There in front of them was an abandon hospital hall. The floor tiles were worn out. Walls paint was corroding .The tarnish ceiling was visible There was stains of mud and dirt along with some graffiti by rust . There was a filthy board with mucky papers pinned and some were torn. Few chair were there. Some were worn out and others were oxidize. 'Surprising the building is abandon for years then how come there are lights ?', he thought. They walked inside. The women pulled out a pair of plastic gloves and started inspecting the dust particles on the oxidize chairs . "If i'm not mistaken, these particles stayed for a long period of time but how come that is possible, a couple of days ago I saw a lot people here they were planning to clean this and some even started?", analyzed the women. "This place is quite unusual even the scent", sniffed Lou. "What was that?", asked the women in confusion, "I felt as if someone is here". They exchanged glances. "That must be the killer", said Lou and pulled out a revolver. He quietly tip toed towards the room from where is voice came and kicked the stained broken glass window door with his guard on. There was no one only a pigeon stuck on the dirt stained glass window. "Interesting how come there is a pigeon in the middle of night and I saw no bird or any animal around here", he thought. The women continued inspecting until she heard voice of footsteps. "Lou must be here", she thought. The footsteps voices faded then increased and it repeated twice or thrice. "Lou stop doing it, can't you see I'm working here", she said with a little annoyed tone. The voice still repeated. "Lou stop it, its distracting!", she snapped.The anonymous voice continued. She got up with annoyed expression and followed where the voice took her. "Lou stop it!", she continued giving her warnings. She stopped. Here eyes were wide open. "What is a girl doing here?", she thought as she analysed a figure of a young teenage about fourteen maybe with open waist length black hair and wearing a knee length white dress, was standing in front of her. She moved forward. "What are you doing here?", she asked. There was no response. "You shouldn't be here, Your parents must be worried about you", she said and picked up here hand. "I'll take you home" walked towards the door towards down stairs. Lou walked out of the room. "There is nothing to inspect here", he said. He walked down the stairs and suddenly he heard a scream. "A scream?, oh no she must be in trouble', he said. Then he started calling her name. He turned around and saw a girl with bloody white clothes. Her head was down. Her eyes were covered by her bangs and all could be seen was an evil smirk. He moved back . Unexpectedly the lights started fluctuating. The girl moved as the lights fluctuated. The lights went off and massive screams were heard. © 2016 Luc Hunter |
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Added on July 11, 2016 Last Updated on July 11, 2016 AuthorLuc HunterKuala Lumpur , MalaysiaAboutThe journey of life starts when you flip the first page of a book more..Writing
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