Wrath

 

 

 

 

I give no mercy to those who test my patience,

Which is thinner than tissue paper.

I have a wicked mind,

With vengeful thoughts of those who do me wrong.

 

My uniform consists of black and red,

The color of darkness and blood.

I feel at peace when taking my anger out

On some innocent passerby,

Unlucky enough to cross my path.

 

To me, Wrath is no sin,

It is a pleasure.

Anger amuses me,

And the pain that flashes across their faces,

Is truly hilarious.

 

I will be damned,

Condemned to Hell for eternity,

For the Anger I take out,

On those innocent people.

But to me,

Hell is heaven,

Just like Wrath is a Holy Virtue.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. I don't think that good, though.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Neat! Reminds me of my inner demons that make me a Catholic. XD LOL! ...Satire...

Anyways, I love how eerie this poem is! I have no idea what Chloe Madison is talking about though; Satanists don't kill people... well, not generally, that is.

So, yeah, this was actually pretty good. I love the second and third stanzas! I see my own thoughts in those two. XD LOL! Great job!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Shane Brooks]

I like it I like it a lot great imagery dig the uniform color of darkness and blood it's got a kinda twisted perspective and I like that to

[Michael Carr]

it's ok. not your best, some lines feel forced, dare I say cliche.
however, the wording is more the fault than anything else.
the imagery is very neat as is the brooding tone you set.
not my fav of yours but still an interesting read.
better than most of its type.
well done again

[GetTheHellOut]

Anger to the greatest extent all expressed. I like it.

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

satanist?

try not to kill anyone.
you should try punching a pillow or something.