Would You?

It's a dark poem. I suggest you don't read if you hate darkness and comments with the Devil in 'em, I guess. I got the idea off of a super cool song.

Would you dare take a trip into my mind,

And find the Devil that is so well hidden?

 

 How long will you last,

With no sunlight,

Or warmth?

My mind is as cold as a winter night,

Maybe even colder… 

 

 

Would you dare take the dreaded trip into my wicked mind,

The one that has been so tainted and stained?

 

 Hear the ghoulish screams as you turn each corner, 

In this maze of darkness,

In which no one is safe.

 

Would you dare a journey through the most wicked, 

Stained,

Hellish minds of them all?

In search of the Devil who taints us all?

Would you brave a trip into your own mind?

 

 

After all, we all have the Devil hidden deep inside…

Author's Note

Like I said before...If you don't like dark poems (which, I THINK this is dark), you shouldn't have read it...I got the idea from one of these songs I like. Is it too...evil? Insane? Eh, well, that's me! But please...don't be brutal.

Reviews

[darkgurl]

"Would you dare take the dreaded trip into my wicked mind, The one that has been so tainted and stained?" Love these lines here I really liked the whoel thing, This was wonderfully put together and know what It's sad to say but true we all have the devil inside. I think this is an AWESOME! write. Way to go. I slap you a high five on this.

[Michael Carr]

really powerful. the italisized lines are mindblowing are they yours?
truly chilling and fantastic imagery.
great work!

[alma tatiana]

wow its creative
i like it..it shows part of u i guess...
jajaja love u girl

[Olivera]

Your poem is quite good and I like it. Thank you for participating in Goth Verses Contest.

[Lazzz is twisessed]

Rebecca! This is a very awesome poem! I love the poems. We all do have a demon inside! (Yes,... I am not goth and this is coming from me.) but Yeah. Sometimes you can swear you would have red eyes and horns.

[The Morbid The Merrier]

i loved ben. truely wondaful. idk what to say. it just blew my mind. frikin' awesome! you have 666disturbed's official seal (not the animal) of approval.

[Ana]

I like it! Very creative Becca!