I'm glad you include "take off your make-up" becuz this is my pet peeve. It looks so strange to me, when a beautiful person covers healthy skin, freckles, natural smile lines with JUNK (the worst is botox, a toxin injected to numb one's natural response to life!) I love that your poem has a nice balance of pointing out the mask and also showing a positive alternative in inspiring bold strokes (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
I'm glad you include "take off your make-up" becuz this is my pet peeve. It looks so strange to me, when a beautiful person covers healthy skin, freckles, natural smile lines with JUNK (the worst is botox, a toxin injected to numb one's natural response to life!) I love that your poem has a nice balance of pointing out the mask and also showing a positive alternative in inspiring bold strokes (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie