I know what everybody thinks?!?!?!

Once upon a tine,there was a boy called Max.When Max was five years old, he found he had a magic power.He could hear what other people thinks in their heart,but he didn't tell anyone because he thought everyone would not like him.When he was six years old,he went to school,and he knew everybody didn't like him.He is very sad.His asked him why he felt so sad.He decide to tell his his mom"I know what other people say in their heart!"And I know all the classmates don't like me!"he starts crying,His mom said"Oh!That 's fine,everybody don't like you but you can still study your own thing, just don't play with them."So,Max just stuied all the time and didn't care anything and he got high marks in his assessment.His family was very happy and Max had a very happy child time.The End

Reviews

[Gloria]

Then what happen to his telent?

[yoyo]

A very good story but it doesn't make any sense.It is not too interesting !
I know you can writ a better one!!!