Mary Jane

Filled with ceaseless torment
Your lungs expand with temporary bliss
Absorb beautiful ignorance

Reviews

[Ryan Riley]

Nicely written ...short and to the point.

[Mikayla_Stagg]

Short but meaningful. I liked it. Lots of emotion in it

[kylie giamba]

Thank you!

[Justin]

that was really good, it has alot of emotions in it :) :)

[kylie giamba]

thank you!

[Justin]

your welcome, it was really good, cant wait to read the next chapter!!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

To good to read and it reminded me the beautiful Mary Jane(kirsten dunst) from Spiderman!

[kylie giamba]

thank you :)

[The Quill]

deep and meaningful, "beautiful ignorance", this is one of its own kind phrase :) nice

[kylie giamba]

thank you very much!

[wordman]

I can see a great movie or series here

[kylie giamba]

What exactly do you mean?

[wordman]

I mean this reads like a tv series

[Andrew]

I love how you can make something that suppose to be "bad" sound like something really good.

[kylie giamba]

Thank you!