Jeffery the Mysterious

unfinished short story

Jeffery the Mysterious

There once was a monster colony called Zallia. In Zallia there was a monster named Jeffery. Jeffery was a new type of monster, he didn't fit in with all the others. You see, he looked and behaved a little different. The other monsters were scared of how different he was. Usually when a monster was born with unusual qualities, it meant that monster would need to use that difference to save the colony from whatever event was taking place. In the past, there was a monster named Mogar the Fierce and he was built much bigger than the rest. Mogar the Fierce had to defeat a neighboring colony when they were trying to conquer Zallia. He used his great strength to overpower the greatest warriors from the neighboring colony and that colony was forced to back off. The monsters took Jeffery’s difference to mean that he would need to save them. The only problem was that Zallia wasn’t in danger. How was he supposed to save Zallia if he didn't know what he was up against?

To be continued…

Reviews

[Ali Diehl]

The names are all really unique through this, which made the reading very interesting. The new concepts and ideas are clever and compelling.

[Nicole Klein]

Nice short story! It was very cute :) When you are writing next time I would add some descriptions of the dinosaurs so we can picture them lol. But nice job, it was cute.