Can you see how I feel?

These try to express strong feelings I had for someone about 6 years ago. I was conflicted since she wasnt free to be involved.

It is so obvious I am sure
The way I feel about you 

Do you notice though my eyes?
Can you see how I feel?

I don't see others only you
I always listen to you, your voice 

When you are around no one else is
When you speak all is quiet

When you feel something I do too
When you want an opinion I take your side

When you look at me I am calm and alive
When you walk into a room no one else is there

When you need something I am there
When you ask I always answer

When I leave for a while I worry about you
Are you going to be ok? Do you need me for something?

When you are not ok I notice right away
When you are upset I ask if I can help

When you laugh I look at your face 
When you frown I see your sad eyes

I want you to know How I feel
I want to know could you feel the same?

I'm afraid you may want another another man
Could this be true? This would hurt me so much

When you are somewhere else I am with you
When I am away You are always with me

When will I be able to tell you? Of my true love for you?
What will you say To my expressions of love?

Author's Note

This is straight from my heart.

Reviews

[~ Stefanie ~]

In the third to last stanza you repeated the word "another" twice. Unless that was intentional. Anyway, this was a beautiful write, and I loved how you posed a situation and ended it with a respnse:
"When you look at me I am calm and alive
When you walk into a room no one else is there

When you need something I am there
When you ask I always answer"

I thought it was great!

[Erotic Goddess]

Such a questioning tone throughout, with doubt and caring so steeped into the words. Beautiful!

xxoxx
Goddess

[Becky C Strukamp]

These feelings and emotions I know so well
they could have been utterances from my heart over and over throughout my life. I really enjoyed reading and remembering. Beautifully expressed

[Kesav Easwaran]

Beautiful expressions of love from a beautiful(ly) loving heart...nice write...liked

[Leon R]

Amazing work. All the feelings put inside could be felt through the words. You are very good at expressing such strong emotions with words. Excellent.

[Walk away slow poet]

I really love this write, This is really awesome, love the feelings in this. Amazing write.

[DreyaArt]

very interesting, you put it under the catagory of "story" but it has more of a ring as a poem would. it was an interesting read, a lot of questions, almost as if you had to write it out to figure out what you were asking. questions comments and concerns to the lady in your life.
the odd placement of capital letters, spaces and punctuation make it a difficult read for me. i am so used to writing smoothly, and understanding when you have to force the words to make sense.
this seemse like a well thought idea, but i think the writing style in itself either needs some work, or clarification.
as if this was out of your writing comforts or something.
anyways just my naiive opinion, i do not mean to annoy or offend.
Dreya

[Kaylor Mason]

Is he in love, obssessed, or enslaved--and is there any difference? I think this poem explores that theme very well

[Muse]

This was like a long ramble coming from a devoted lover. It was a smooth read. Fluid in your ideas, thoughts, and emotions. It needed a few more pauses, commas....I had to pause to take a breath, but with the presention used to pull the reader along...I could not. Maybe that was your intent? Nicely penned.

[Aramey]

I love the way this one takes you on a sort of emotional journey, it's like passing through someones thoughts and straight into the heart. Excellent write!