ok Kyle your a good writer, you are, but you need to understand that your writing style is poetry..say it with me now "pooooeeeetttrrrryyyy" :) and i dont mean to be rude, but you CAN write a story in poetry, but to label a poem as "story" well...thats just backwards.
this has a beautiful question, your hinting but your not telling completely.
And i dont mean to say that All of your writings are poetry, for the most part you got it straight..ish :)
but like, look at how you've placed the spaces, see the lines, the way that the words move before your eyes, that is Poetry my friend.
a story takes you places deep within the imagination or mind's eye of the author, and poetry has a story to it, but its the arrangement of the words.
now as annoying as this is to me :) i cannot help but return to your writings, some of which i stop reading mid-text, because you are a brilliant writer, you just seem to be alittle well...lost.
anyways that is just my naiive opinion. I do not mean to annoy or offend.
Dreya
Interesting ... :) we like to string it out a little , I know I do... heat up the rising intensity.. who has the most to loose ??? .......... nothing to be lost that which is'nr worth loosing I heard..
I need to focus on my writing more. I tend to write something decent, and then lose interest.
My goal is to finish some of the things that I have started and post them soon.
Thanks for dropping.. more..