How Romantic!

How Romantic!

A Story by Kyle

Seeing her for the first time was special. She was so pretty without knowing it. She was involved in care free activities without even giving me a thought.

I wanted her. She was the one for me. I set out on a mission to make her mine. I took care of what I needed to and I approached her lovingly and carefully. I wanted her to like me. I didn't want anything to get in our way. I knew we would be great together.

Talking to her for the first time was so sweet. I felt like a little kid again.

Later when we were living together I learned where she liked to be touched And what made her happy. My joy was seeing her get excited, and holding her close afterward.

We spend glorious evenings sitting close and warming each other. She knows when my day was stressful and makes the effort to show me her love.

When she had her surgery I was there waiting for her, worrying about her. I took her home afterward and held her close most of the night.

We've been together for years now. Ours is a close, loving relationship. We know how to make each other happy.

© 2011 Kyle


Author's Note

Kyle
This is concerning my relationship to my dog Meeka.

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Haha, well done, made me laugh :) I imagined your love story like a short film in my head while reading it.. now my movie feels so wrong :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


awww this is so sweet(:
i couldnt help but smile as i continued to read it

Posted 13 Years Ago


OMG! being about as romantic and love inclined as a burr I must admit I read this cringing until your author's note almost made me tinkle from laughing so hard~ LOVE the sarcasric wink at the end~

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a heartfelt touching write! I have to say though I thought I was reading about you and a woman. I love dogs though, I have a Molly!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is such a sweet poem. I love that it was about your dog..that's the truest love there is!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good job of disguising the fact that this was about a dog...very cool.

"Later when we were living together I learned where she liked to be touched And what made her happy." I'd put a comma after "together" and make "And" lowercase.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so sweet - i wrote about my turbo too - there's no love like puppy love :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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LOL..thought you were talking about another kinda b***h!!! She's cute though ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well, you sure had me fooled. It's no wonder that dog is man's best friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


its cute.
i found it funny it was about a dog.
but cute

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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