I live for this?

its self explanitory just tons of emotions pouring out of me

I live for this?

 

I live to help people be happy

I live to make others feel good about themselves.

I live to be used by others

I live to be taken for granite

I live to be crushed over and over again

I live to be every ones problems

I live to be the scapegoat.

Well you know what, im sick of being portrayed as all of these things.

I will no longer let people walk all over me.

I will learn to become stronger.

I will learn to make myself happy.

I will overcome this depression… some day.

Reviews

[Emily?]

I absolutely love this one Kyle! I love how there is so much emotion and feeling. IIt's really amazing. Keep it up! Great write =]

[The Wave]

nice piece

i understand the feeling, but i feel this piece could be stronger. by repeating "i live" and "i will" does create emphasis but you lack a certain "wow" factor in this still.
overall, not bad, does need some work though, but really,
good job

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i wish that i could overcome ....... you have given me hope ... i like this very much