Destruction of our fate.

its pretty self explanatory :) let me know what you think about it that would be lovely.

We creep in the shadows, we hide in the dark.
Like addicts all were looking for is a spark.
To get us through this hell that we call life.
We b***h about problems instead of making them right,
We are our own demise. We dont look up at the sky.
So where will we go when we die?

We try so hard to better ourself.
but how can we when we are all living in hell.
Our desire is to stand before the heavenly gate.
Not many people believe in what is at stake.
For all we know this could be the destruction of our fate.

The demons surround your soul and evil consumes you.
Your mistakes has brought you here, and there's nothing you can do.
All that torture and Heartbreak is starting to sink in.
Bloody revenge is the only thing on your mind.
Your losing everything. You begin to crazily unwind.

GO! Run and hide, Stay scared.
Our fate is at stake, Just from fear.
You crumble at the site of the devils stares
Your in hell! Now you Know why your here.

Reviews

[amandamercer`xo]

i love this poem.. i can really relate to it, and it's really descriptive. good job :)

[Bre]

thats so freaking kool!!!!!! i love it. Completely understandable!