I cant Escape.

Just a quick poem about a girl that has my heart twisting and turning and she doesnt even know it yet.

 

I cant Escape.

 

 

 

You have me hooked like an addict to cocaine.

My heart is a confused mess, am I insane?

Or am I wanting you back.

You have me feeling so out of wack.

Your smile embraces me.

Your charm weakens me.

I’m stuck in your eyes.

Was it all just a bunch of lies?

Because when we were together, I felt alive.

You have me trapped in my own misery.

The way you tease me is like blasphemy.

But I cant fight it, I’m going to soon fall.

Cause you’ve thrown me against the wall.

I cant escape it.

So what do I make of it?

Absolutely nothing.

Always confusing me.

So are you proud of it?

Reviews

[Emily?]

When I read the first part it made me say awwww. really loudly, It was kind of funny. But when I read on, I said to myself how true this piece really is. And it makes it better that It came from the heart! Fabulous Job =]

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

wow i have felt this way about someone .... confused

[Woodstockforpeace]

This is good-- very good at that. I like the last line, to me it leaves the poem in a powerful note. Which makes it more important. The ryhme is good, but correct me if im wrong- does a poem need a period at the end of each line? It's all one thought(i think) so at the end of yout indevisual thoughts then bunch them together with a porper, punuation?
I dont but that what i do most of the time, beciase that's what someone told me. aha. but over all this is good i have u a 90/100 rating!
Great job!

[Allison]

Awesome piece of writing! I really luv it!!!

[ebur™]

great poem. it's both a bit demanding and a bit romantic. I love the last line "So are you proud of it?" that had to be my favorite part ^_^. Great job! :)

[Jane Doe]

i like it quite alot its very heart warming in a way and its very like its flows in a good way
beutiful
luv it alot
Luv ya