Thank You/ Hate You/ Wont forget what you put me through.

about an ex of mine let me know what you think

And to the sound of our once beating hearts.
Rip to a love that all fell apart.
Tattered and torn i now remain.
your shallow ways are to blame.

I couldnt give you enough now i see your true colors.
So go back to your emotional daze. live your life in a stress addicted phase.
A heart is a fragile piece that we keep locked away.
Your unforgetable torture and lies now leaves me a stray.

Now look at you alone searching for love and grace.
Your cold dark heart is never to be embraced!

I now realize your just a fake , and nothing but a disgrace.
Dont ever tell me what we had was real.
I just wish you could feel the pain and heartache that i did feel.

~breakdown~

TELL THE TRUTH! your nothing but a waste of my time.
HOW DO YOU SLEEP WITH GUILT IN YOUR PRESENSE dont worry bout me ill be just fine.
Over and over i had dreams of you suffering and feeling dispairr.
YOU LOST YOUR CHANCE AND I DONT EVEN CARE!

This lonesome heart is looking for a contender.
Dont worry about me ill get better.
Just fix that hole in your heart and know what you lost.
Me my support my love you lost it but at what cost!

~breakdown number 2~

TELL ME HOW COULD YOU BE SO DECEIVING.
NOW IT IS YOU WITH THE TORTURED HEART ALL ALONE WITH NO CHANCE OF HEALING!.

F**K THE PAST THEY BRING YOUR NAME TO SHAME.
SO GO KEEP CUTTING AND BLOW OUT YOUR BRAINS!.
CAUSE IN MY EYES YOULL ALWAYS BE THE SAME
 

Reviews

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is amazing... i love this... i can feel the pain in every sentence... every word

[Ryan]

...wow...this was great. Very intense and powerful. You did a good job with letting the reader feel what you felt (or feel). The flow was definately amazing. I wish I had something constructive to say, but I don't so...yeah I loved this haha. Awesome job! Lookin forward to reading more of your stuff ^^