i love you

i luv you but i cant have you!!!!!!you always want something that you cant have!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!love is somethin that you cant buy with you money or looks it is your personality you should look for that not the way you look or he or she look!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Split up into sentences would've been better for my sleepy eyes!
But nonethless lotta truth spoken here.

Well done

[PaperHearts]

Nice write! There was so much truth and wisdom in this write, and I really appreciated and admired the amount of strength that seemed to exude from this poem. I found the format of it a little unnerving; perhaps cut out some of the exclamation marks, and form your writing into paragraphs. The content and quality is there, so don't hide behind those incessant exclamation points! The words will speak for themselves. :P
~PaperHearts

[akapr17other]

This poem is very true, and very sweet. A little less exclamation points would take away some confusion :) but they definately show strong emotions.

[Moth Phoenix]

Great Poem :) It's true you always want something that you can't have... .well sometimes :)

[Escape My Fate]

Haha i love this. Its so cute :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This poem is really true. You can't have whatever you want. You have to wait to find that special someone that will love you back. I think this was nice. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Sarah Jane]

I like it because its so true, I just didnt like the bajlillon !'s but your right, we always seem to want something we cant have and paople need to focus more on personaily.