Hearts Pain

A free-style poem of a broken heart

As Life goes on

my heart refuses to follow

my mind seems withdrawn

from the trials of tomorrow

thoughts cloud my vision

pain clouded thoughts

trying for this pain's excision

all efforts led to naught

of all things I'm unworthy of

the greatest of these must be love

Reviews

[Setareh Sanaei]

i absolutely loved it
it reminds me of fire and ice
by favorite poet robert frost

[I Am Svetlana]

A main point of life is to work to get your heart broken and to wait to get it repaired. That's how I see it. We all have to work through the bad people that don't deserve us or break our hearts to get to the ones that respect us and give us the world when we don't even ask for it. That's what love is.