You Said You Hated Kids

You Said You Hated Kids

A Story by kyam
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Mother

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     When you had the 6th child, a beautiful baby boy with blue, blue eyes and blond hair and gave him to me to raise.  I was the 3rd child out of seven.  Well it was my pleasure to have such an influence in my precious brothers life. I knew nothing about it so I went to the library and got a book and got the information that I needed.  Since I was just 15 and with no guidance, I was doing a bang up job. 
      Then you got pregnant again and this time it was a little boy again, but he had the darkest brown eyes and dark brown hair.  He really looked like a gorilla.  But what you did next was mean.  You threw away the 2 year old blond boy (Mike) and made me start with the new baby (Rick).  Mike didn't know what happened, he was so heartbroken and he cried and cried for attention and I gave him as much as you would let me, which was not adequate.  You  loved Rick because he had dark features like dad.  It was not fair at all.  Even me being blond and green eyes, so I wasn't doted on either. I knew the pain.
       You took those two beautiful babies to an orphanage and put them on the steps and drove away.  I asked you why and how you could do that and you said that you hated kids, how dare you.  They are NOT like toys that get broken and you can throw them away! They have abandonment issues to this day. It just wasn't fair and if I could have I would have adopted them myself. I love you my brothers and will forever.

© 2017 kyam


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there were some very funny bits in this story

Posted 6 Years Ago


kyam

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review...Kyam
It takes strength to even write of this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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kyam

6 Years Ago

I think what doesn't kill you develops character...lol. Thank you so much for taking the time to re.. read more
my words simply can not touch this kind of pain, betrayal and abandonment ...so sorry for these experiences in your life ... i am another who is here listening by reading your poems ... my best wishes for you right now
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kyam

6 Years Ago

Thank you for responding, I really, really do appreciate your words for me.....Kyam
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

(((((((((((((xoxoxox)))))))))))))))))
kyam

6 Years Ago

Thank You so much for taking the time to give your review!!! Appreciated Grandly....Kyam
How awful, I'm so sorry and hope writing helped in some small way x

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Very intense and personal sounding. I think a poetic form could serve this piece better. If you would like to try that I could help.

Posted 7 Years Ago


There are so many things that happen in this world, but abandoning children is one of the saddest, I know what that is like, I lived through it, but to those out there with the same story I just hope they know that there is always a solution, and to your brothers, I hope they have found the beauty of life through such torturous ways, I know they will.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Life is peculiar sometimes.....

Posted 7 Years Ago


kyam

7 Years Ago

I give up. it's simple.....it's my burden and I can take it to the ocean....where I belong!!!....Kya.. read more
kyam

7 Years Ago

I apologize to you.....I have forgiveness You can kill me but not eat me......Kyam
kyam

7 Years Ago

I'm sorry but I'm drunk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kyam
kyam

Clarksville, IN



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I have just recently started writing and am a mere novice. I enjoy short stories and poems. I've had an immense amount of pain in my life and I would say that's my greatest source of writing to heal.. more..

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