I Wish My Mom Had Compassion

Looking back

Were you ever happy mama in your days?

Is that why you were so mean in your ways

You loved beating us until we bled

Hating us is what you said

Couldn't you have shown remorse?

Making us scream at your force

Compassion was not for you

Our punishment was due

Could you have shown us love?

I always prayed to God up above

Please keep her from killing us

She hit us like it was just

Your passion was to cause pain

I tried to love you but it remains

With scars on my heart to say

I will forgive you anyway

Couldn't you have cared?

So we wouldn't be so scared

You just did what you did and we endured

For you to love there was no cure.......

Reviews

[G. B. Banks]

I can feel you Kyam through these lines
It speaks to my soul
Deep write

[Bare trees]

And so the pattern continues. One can only guess what went through her mind. What she perceived as right in her eyes obviously wasn't.

[BlaqkShadow]

I'm sorry for the truth in this poem because it clearly still hurts you so badly, I hope writing helps. Some people aren't built to be compassionate and we can never understand it, I'm sorry you are a victim of this. The raw emotion is clear in your writing, and I hope your friends help soothe your soul. XxXx

[Re-Pete]

some people just can't - their hurt is too much for them. a painful write. i too know what it feels like. i feel for you.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

The story of carried over hate and grudge. This is the modern day of life, the modern love, my hurt is your hurt! Very good!