The Darkness in My Soul

I couldn't let go of you

I had a distorted view

That you had to be there for me

Regardless of your own needs

I kept you in a box

No keys to the lock

Letting no one see

Your lovely beauty

You were the only one that I loved

I knew that I vowed up above

To keep you in my heart

That was broken apart

I have to let in the light

It is only right

So other people can see

How amazing you are to me

Reviews

[FIN]

Coming to the realization that you were holding this entity out of the light from others to receive glory from and most importantly give unto, is a profound step in your emotional integrity, Ms. Kyam.

I loved that you shared this realization, with us.

LR

[BlaqkShadow]

Stunning, the idea of wanting to keep something so beautiful and precious as close to you as possible but knowing it's wrong is a powerful one and so well expressed here, Excellent XxXx

[kyam]

Thank you my friend, your review is precious to me!........Love.....Kyam

[Re-Pete]

the light still shines in - we just have to lift the shade. no one or no thing can ever steal the light we hold onto in our hearts. Keep letting your light shine and the light of those you love can shine through too.

[kyam]

Thank you for your insight....I am going to grief therapy and will continue until I wrap my brain around it and can soothe the pain.......I want to thank you to the depths of my soul.......Kyam

[LapseOfMind]

Very nicely done, great job!

[kyam]

I want to thank you for your review, it was so kind of you......Kyam

[kaz]

Bravo! This poem in absolutely breath taking. I loved the complete raw truth held in these few stanzas. :)

[kyam]

Oh my I am so flattered that you gave me such a wonderful review, I'm deeply touched...Your picture is beautiful by the way. Gratefully yours....Kyam

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful poem! The second and last stanza connects beautifully.

- Cyprian

[kyam]

Cyprian, that review makes me want to keep going! You are an inspiration with your kind words....Kyam
Thank you........

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome, Kyam :)