Using Godgiven Rights

Using Godgiven Rights

A Poem by kyam
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right or wrong

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Right is when you feel good about what you've done
Wrong is when you lied to them and yourself for fun
Right is being protected by piece of mind
Wrong is deceitful you will find

Wrong is corruption from the start
Right is when you do it from the heart
Wrong is peace and devil telling you things
Right feels good like remembering

Right is pleasant, happy, and jubilant 
Wrong is not paying the rent
Right wins out always you see
Wrong is abusing me

© 2016 kyam


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Hi
Good to contemplate. "Piece" I think you want to be "peace" and "devil tell you things" will sound better as "devil telling you things". Thanks.

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kyam

8 Years Ago

Thanks Matt, I do so appreciate your reviews........Kyam

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Added on January 12, 2016
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kyam
kyam

Clarksville, IN



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I have just recently started writing and am a mere novice. I enjoy short stories and poems. I've had an immense amount of pain in my life and I would say that's my greatest source of writing to heal.. more..

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