What made you God?

What made you God?

A Poem by kyam
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What gave you the right?

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Here is Thanksgiving and Christimas at our door
I last remember her lying on the floor
The holidays full of cheer
You choked her from the rear

The tree lights will be so amazing to all
Did she make a big thump with her final fall?
Just all that Holiday Spirit, what can it mean?
Did she hit you and kick hard and scream?

She would have bought her baby some cute toys to play
Instead you brought me death my way
She would have been so happy too
Not just me hating you

She was just getting ready to go to work that day
Why did you decide she couldn't stay?
She had her clothes all laid out
Instead I bet she kicked and shouted

To deaf ears all around
Cause you a funny clown
How you brought her down
Then you left and went downtown

Who made you God that day
Able to take her away
Not let her stay
Make her miss her daughter's everyway

© 2015 kyam


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Wow, it's good your expressing your emotions through poetry but this is really intense! In both a good way and a sad way, the juxtaposition between the happiness associated with the holidays and the terrible events you suffered is amazing, an emotive work x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kyam

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review and taking your valuable time to do so. It always means so very much to m.. read more
BlaqkShadow

9 Years Ago

Always happy to read your work x



Reviews

Wow, it's good your expressing your emotions through poetry but this is really intense! In both a good way and a sad way, the juxtaposition between the happiness associated with the holidays and the terrible events you suffered is amazing, an emotive work x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kyam

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review and taking your valuable time to do so. It always means so very much to m.. read more
BlaqkShadow

9 Years Ago

Always happy to read your work x

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kyam
kyam

Clarksville, IN



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I have just recently started writing and am a mere novice. I enjoy short stories and poems. I've had an immense amount of pain in my life and I would say that's my greatest source of writing to heal.. more..

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