I want to hear from you!

It could be good for me

Let me hear from you please

I need to hear what you see

I want your thoughts written down

I want to go through your minds town

I want your thoughts for awhile too

I want to share everything from you

You're amazing you see

A real thrill to me

I hate it when your gone

Like losing my favorite song

You come back to where you belong

And entertain me with your passage of long

Thank you for listening to me

A fan you see

Someone whom adores your writing

especially when you're not in hiding

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

""Let me say I can read you all day long
and if you ask me what I see
I will say ..I see a beautiful lake of words
Soothing ,mesmerizing and almost calling me to dance upon them
They are the rhythms seems like coming from heaven
I hate to shift my gaze
I wish to stay longer
Maybe forever
I can die over the roses you made
And still it wouldn't be enough
To say ..How beautiful it was to read
Words of paradise on my lap""


Well ...I couldn't help to write a reply kind of poetry for this beautiful write of yours.I really loved it ..it speaks of so much talent.Thanks for sharing nd m really glad to read it .Thumbs up !

[kyam]

Oh my goodness, what a great review...Thank you so much for it, I do appreciate it ever so much! You inspire me to keep writing......I'm grateful, Kyam

[Lenah Mehzabin]

My pleasure.. keep writing dear :)