No More One Day

Cry me a bucket of tears

Show me your fears

Get down to the pain

Ain't it a shame

How she'll always be gone

I'm singing the same old song

Maybe one of these days

It will all go away

No more pain for me

When I'm gone you see

I'll be with her then

I won't be back again

My dreams will all come true

Because Honey I'll be with you

I'll wait an eternity

For you and me

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

I really like this, but is this a personal experience? No good man or woman takes the first heart forever. Looking back if I married my first 10-15 girlfriends I would of made a horrible mistake. You'll know in your heart when you find the right one, you'll just know it. And every woman or man will just fade away, like it did for me. And hey, you'll probably get a great editor like I got too. :)

Anyways, besides my rambling about how life should be, this is an awesome write up. I really can see what emotions are caught here, don't change a thing. Great work :)

[kyam]

This is about my daughter that was murdered at 28, the love of my life. And thank you for your Wonderful and in depth review, how exciting! You have made my month, if not more! You're an amazing reviewer and I appreciate it to the bottom of my heart! Graciously Thankful....Kyam

[BlaqkShadow]

Another excellent and emotive poem from you hun, it shows the more tender side of heartache, the longing to be back with the one you love. Brilliant X

[kyam]

I want you to know that I appreciate so much you taking your precious time and reviewing my meager work. It really does come from my heart and I know you recognize it. I am grateful for you!.....Kyam