Accepted

The crowd roars

They love to watch me I see

Just what is it about me

Do I really give them a thrill

do I go in for the kill

I borrow their own feelings you know

that way they will have to like me and show

how much they really like whom they are

not me try to be a star

I do exciting things that they wish they could do

they love me because I remind them of what they would love to prove

so they accept in their minds like they would each other

not like they wouldn't their own brother

they wish I could talk to them and borrow me

I could never do that because I am to busy

I'll make them think about life

I hope they might think about their girlfriends and wife

my body is magnificent and beautiful

they want me but can't touch me, that's questionable

they think they really love me sometimes

they whistle and say things and I don't mind

Life is a game with big game pieces to play

come back and see me maybe another day

Reviews

[Siegfried]

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