It Just Is

 

My Heart has been broken but for the last time.

Out of the depths of sorrow only for her will I climb.

My soul is now lost like a pebble in the sands.

She still holds the pieces of my heart in her hands

Reviews

[HoorayForUnderdog]

Where is this chick! Point me in her direction! Pass me my energy pill ! ...just kidding...I like your poems because they are straight from your heart and romantic...but sad

[TL Boehm]

deeply longing and heart felt. I hope you bring back more work to this site. You are missed.

[O!]

This is so sad and so beautifully written but still so sad .........and u need to take ur heart back and put it where it belongs coz ure losing colour in ur face and i like u all pink!! ;-)

O! :-)

[Pamela]

A sad and brief little poem but with a strong connection to most of us. I hope your heart heals.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Love this.. sad but a nice read. I enjoyed reading this , alot said in a short piece, good job.

Peace

[Brianna Brie]

This is my favorite of yours. Such brokeness and despair along with honesty and I totally get why love her.

Out of the depths of sorrow only for her will I climb.

powerful line...she is the only one that can make the pain go away.

[Christopher Thomas Wood..]

very powerful

"My soul is now lost like a pebble in the sands.
She still holds the pieces of my heart in her hands"

Brilliant!