HIT'EM WITH THE AFTER SHOCK

the 1st verse from a hiphop lyric i composed.

on a 1,

a 2,

its kurrupted getting off the wall,

and 'bout to satisfy my curiosity like aaron hall,

am that made n***a,

payed n***a,

often imitated n***a,

but cant be duplicated n***a,

(and why is that?)

cuz my finger's on a nikel plated nine trigger,

fool am nothing like puff daddy,

puff adder,

don dada,

like agatha,

i gots tha,

skills of a writer,

a determined fighter,

got nothing to lose cuz i aint not a quiter,

running like a cheetah,

and that,

has got,

m***********s keeping there distance,

seeking assistance,

no resistance,

they start running helter skelter when they see kurrupted on the road,

looking for hide out when am on a stroll,

no lve at all,

multi platinum hits for the streets when i flow, 

Author's Note

will finish it later

Reviews

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

With music it will sound great...Its not my kind of music..but it is still very good. Keep at it...Great job!
It kind of reminds me of Insane Clown Posse, sorry if you don't like 'em..I do...It reminds me of their newest album..The Tempest.