I LOVED YOU, I LOATHE YOU

Engulfed by the flames of rage,

I write my pains on this page,

Which for years my soul it has caged,

 

TO HER: I loved you so dear,

                                          So clear,

           The whole world witness will bear,

                                                               I care,

           Eased your fear,

           For you I was there,

          You are one thing that cannot be replaced in my life,

           So significant you are, my sight,

 

TO HIM: you are my best friend,

                                             A perfect mate,

       Together we sleep and together we wake,

       From the same plate together we ate,

       Confided in each other every time we sit,

       Even though I got the job first, my wages we split,

       My annual leave at the hospital by your side I spent,

 

 

Girl I can’t believe,

How all these years you try to deceive,

What did I do for this to receive?

This torment alone my soul shall grief,

 

WHO ON EARTH DO I TELL?

                To share the pain and feel a bit well

MY BEST FRIEND?

            Absolutely not,

                Nay, Animosity is what I am feeling,

                         Cause him i feel right now like killing,

FOR HE WAS THE ONE SHE WAS KISSING.

 

 

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

A unique way to express an ageless deception! Barbara

[Belle Morte]

Oh, deception and pain. The worst emotions to feel. Even worse when it's your love and your best friend. Very good write hun. I love it.

[Lady Of Darkness]

Being deceived and lied too...I know this story well. It's not always easy in the end you just end up feeling hurt and angry. If more people told the truth there would be no need for heartache. A very powerful piece.
Nicely penned and well done.

[Tai Chi Italy]

Oh it is horrible when you are deceiveced by your best friend, especially in the romantic stakes! but it does happen. I did it myself when I was 13! My best friend never forgave me, married her beau, then divorced him and came out as a lesbian!lol

Smiling at you

Tai

[Brandon Taylor-Black]

I have been in this exact predicament....Unfortunately, I didn't handle it very well.
This is a powerful piece, excellantly written.
Who do we turn to when our friends and loved ones are the ones who have betrayed us?
Excellant writing.
Bravo!