WISHED I TOLD YOU I LOVED YOU

We meet and were more than friends for 11years, 7 months and 13 days,we were everything perfect, but either due to cowardice or shyness or something worse i dont know, i couldnt and didnt say those magic words till she died...ITS A TERRIBLE FEELING, IF TH

 

This pen is a spear writing with the ink of pain and despair,

On the sheet of this torned heart,

Each letter I script feels so painful like the death of a beloved parent,

How can I vent my pain?

Even though forever with me it will remain,

Wished I told you I loved you.

(Now how can I stop these tears?)

 

We were not like friends,

But we were like siblings,

We were everything… perfect,

We leaned on each others shoulders,

Though my predilection for you was from the very first day I saw you,

My tongue was tight and I couldn’t tell you,

Now I wished, I told you I loved you.

(Now how can I stop these tears?)

 

 

It was just a stomach ache,

How could such a perfect picture break?

How life I hate,

2 days beside you at the hospital,

You recuperated and are fine,

The smile on your face I couldn’t define,

I only left to go and take a bath at home,

Only to return and find you are gone,

That you died is a reality I will never accept,

Oh how I wish I told you I loved you,

And until I take my last breathe,

I will keep searching till I find you,

Until I do,

I shall consider this life cruel,

And forever regret that…

I wished I told you I loved you a billion times

(Now how can I stop these tears?)

 

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Very emotive and touching...Thank you for sharing...........>:)

[Btwixer]

Such a heart breaking piece here. I can feel the sadness. NIcely expressed

[SAAD AHMED]

good write!!. The first two stanzas are beautiful the last simple but heart breaking.

[Enigma]

Very moving. It touched my heart. I hope you find courage to deal with this intense pain so remarkably expressed in those words.

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I don't think I have been moved as much in a poem as this, it stuck in like a knife. You pain is penned in breathtaking beauty. I can't imagine how this would feel. That soul knows you love them though.

[Ladysue]

oh this was so heartbreaking and so beautiful expressed. I agree with Emily...your heart was known...

[Emily B]

our loved ones know how we feel without the words, no worries about the things we neglected to say . . . your heart was known

[jenxloves]

Death is such a horrible thing and you look at the world from a completely different perspective after a tragedy. I feel for you in this situation. All one can do is look forward. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
Alluring poem. You are a magnificent writer.

[Miss Chriss]

Such a beautiful poem... I know we all have regrets, but going through these harsh realities such as death, only makes us stronger. We all go through hard and sad times but always know even though you never told her, she knew. Keep your head up, be strong and you're going to go a long way! Christina

[Barbara Walker]

This is really sad. Your disbelief at death comes across strongly, as does your regret. Know this-though they are gone from our sight, they are still with us. They can still hear you and do not wish for you to be sick with regret. Barbara