Gone the Walking Dead Days

A little song playing in my head.

 

You make my blood boil.

You make my heart skip.

You make my spine tingle.

You make my lips twitch.

 

All over. All over.

.... to taste you.

All over. All over.

.... to touch you.

Your mind, your body, your soul..

Until you need me to stop-

But then you plead for more.

 

You make my blood boil.

You make my heart skip.

You make my spine tingle.

You make my lips twitch.

Reviews

[Lawrence Parlier]

WoooHooo!!! Simple, sexy, evocative. Pure expression. Wonderful.

[Chris]

This is just sexy - chuckling here.

[Rasputin]

This is kinda kinky...it's got that whole vampire-eroticism thing going for it. Makes me all hot and bothered. Good show.

[JRB]

This is a sweet write, I can relate to it,,,,,,, AND FEEL YOUR EMOTIONS CROSSING OVER from wonder to want

[Kayla Etreni]

sorry, its.
~hayleemorency
but if you still cant find her let me know.. cause shes a awesome writer.... like you!

[Kayla Etreni]

This really explains alot. i usualy get bored prety eassily, but the first stanza, the first line, it capurted my attention. you remeind me of my friends writing, you should check her out ..! her screen name is ..
hayleemorancy~
if you cant find her let me know, cause i think you would like her writing.
anyway, this is a good poem, it explains a lot, and i really like it! :)