just i'll say

another heartfelt piece.

here comes the rain,
makes me cry in vain;
can't hide the pain,
feeling like insane.

those crazy times,
bring tears in my eyes;
trying to keep those lies,
acting in disguise.

sunny day became night,
when you were out of sight;
tears, how I tried to fight,
yet I'm still not alright.

In God I pray,
for you to stay;
"come what may. . ."
just I'll say.

Reviews

[nicolo]

Amen.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

beautiful and blessing lines

[joshua deathdealer]

This sounds good read aloud. Nice work.

[STAR CHILD]

this is a great poem

[M.E.Lyle]

Ah, thwarted love, it's a real pain. Very rhythmic, I like that. I use it myself.

[M Garcia]

Nice

[J Todd Underhill]

Nice write, I like the monorhyme in each stanza, I do those from time to time and I find it tympanically pleasing as it is reas aloud!