mystify

what's really missing?
it's more than just a thing,
does it involve hoping?
or is it longing?

sometimes, it feels like smiling,
yet it feels like crying;
emotions still swaying,
can't help but breaking.

always damn paving,
it keeps on lingering;
tears start falling,
breeze smoothly caressing...

pain slowly killing,
feels like dying;
what's wrong with loving?
it taught me on believing.

Reviews

[Thea]

Full of -ing's... :)))
Good to read it...Nice poem... :)))

[Alexander Mccarthey]

I really like the last line