stay

this is just how it goes. . .

i know eyes don't lie,

i saw it when you passed by;

and I need not to deny

for that is you who makes me cry.

I wanted to see joy and beauty,

but I think, cowardness is just in me.

how I wish I could be the way you wanted me to be,

and wanting me as gift as free.

can I make you stay?

even just for a single day?

you need not to push me away,

I'll always be the same whatever you may say.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

A very melancholy feel on Love and the heart ache it brings. The rhyming is superb. Nicely done.

[STAR CHILD]

this one has sadness to it

[prodicallife]

Very well written appericiation.

Regards
PRODICAL

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice lovely lines...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfect structure and times response, well done

[KAREN]

I feel a sense of longing in this poem, sad and full of emotion. NICE!!

[M Garcia]

Excellent

[joshua deathdealer]

Meaningful write. Excellent expression...xx

[NightShade]

A very emotional piece. such longing and self doubt and then, at the end, a declaration of strength. I like that. Really nice!