silent wish

silent wish

A Poem by kurdapiaful

don't know what am I going into,
I can't even count my sighs every time I think of you;
how I really wish I could let you go,
but that's the only thing I couldn't do.

am I not worthy for you to fight for?
or you just want me to go, and see me no more?
if you will just widely open your door,
I would risk everything that I've been wanting to do before.

it's really hard to balance letting go and holding on,
even though, i know what's really going on;
inside of me, i know, it's not just an infatuation,
and all I am wishing to do is to go in your direction.

wish I could see you each day of my life,
wanting to see me the way I look into your eyes;
and to think that you're always on my mind,
you're everything 'til the end of time.

© 2011 kurdapiaful


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You really do love him, don't you?
You're very honest indeed.
A poem filled with so much love even though he has already let you go.
Stay strong, he may not be the right one for you
Probably the man who will love you endless will come soon. :)
Very nice poem, keep it up and make some more :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Simple and sweet. Keep on writing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Perfectly honest, simple and brave, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is amazing so touching I am really moved by this thanks for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


I loved this. Very romantic and honest. Well done...xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Had me hooked from start to finish!

Posted 13 Years Ago


romantic oi. :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the last line. It really sums up what the poem is about and shows the extent of the dedication of the narrator.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is quite a lovely piece. It's poignancy is of a sort that I think we can all relate to. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is quite a wonderful write. Love the wonderful emotions....xo

Posted 13 Years Ago



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