fooled around

i never thought i'd be as clueleSs as an idiot, until i found out that i am being fooled by the one i trusted the most. . . . . .this is why i wrote this poem. . .

yOu heLped me to Live,
tAught me hOw to beLieVe;
toLd me to fOrgive,
aNd mOst ov aLL is tO giVe. . .
yEt you stiLL LeAve,
tHat i cOuLd hArdLy cOncEived;
yOu hAve jUst dEceivEd,
tHose wOrds. . .. . .yOu diDn't aChieve ;'(

Reviews

[NightShade]

When things like this CRASH, folks tend to scream "OUCH!" in myriad ways; feeling the pain of loss acutely. Funny thing is, most will give it another go, because it's such a thrilling ride. You express a difficult emotion and convey a lot of information in just a few short lines. Bravo!

[Desmund Tiny]

A very sad poem but nice... I know how it feels... I can relate to your poem... keep writing

[leinahtan]

kaluuy. hahahaha

[joshua deathdealer]

This great and original. Well done.

[nicolo]

love fool.