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A Poem by Gabija

Don't call me beautiful
I have more than that.
You can find another words 
to describe me better.
there is more than million words
in our language
so close your eyes and choose.
Anything can be better
than words you said before
you can call me extraordinary
or intelligent and brave. 
This is what I want to be
this is what I crave for.

© 2016 Gabija


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I liked this so much I thought I'd write a reply to it.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


I think anything positive we are called is good... but yes we should have the desire to be called things that define us within.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I'm thinking it's either about being tired of the significant other always using the same compliments, or criticizing yourself. I'm leaning the first option :) Well penned!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gabija

8 Years Ago

thank you.
Nothing wrong with craving more, if he's not up to speed, show him the door.

Posted 8 Years Ago


As mentioned below, this is very honest and straightforward.
The words of a woman who knows what she wants and expects.
This piece only serves to break the surface; why repeat the same words and phrases to someone over and over? There's more beauty in effort to find new ways in saying things.
Good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gabija

8 Years Ago

thank you so much. every word of yours means a lot to me. :)
Asante

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome. :)
so beautiful and honest!!!
I liked this short yet smooth piece of yours ..
so true ...
I like to hear the same.....
keep going...
very nice and bright...
Anindita : )

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gabija

8 Years Ago

thank you, darling. :)

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Added on September 15, 2016
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Gabija
Gabija

Šiauliai, Lithuania



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