B*****d father

B*****d father

A Poem by Gabija

Cheating father,
crying mother, 
praying daughter
and the son that doesn't give a s**t.
broken family
broken heart
broken glass
which can't be fixed.
PAUSE. 
he still gets forgivinen
from a women that
shouldn't give him a second chance.
Mother is trying to forget, 
but the daugher never will.

© 2016 Gabija


Author's Note

Gabija
For some reason I have mixed feelings about this poem.

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Of the three I've read so far this one has multiple spelling weaknesses and tastes wrong.

Mothers are women that often fell in love with Fathers and rather than cut them loose can come to accept transgressions just to keep them somewhat near. Sometimes family financial realities also come into play - eating is one hard habit to break and being out in the rain without a roof sucks... Life has realities that we deal with, life with, and yes - never forget.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gabija

8 Years Ago

very true. thank you for opinion.
Chris

8 Years Ago

welcome and take care. On the whole the three show a good understanding and use of language and kno.. read more

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Added on August 30, 2016
Last Updated on December 16, 2016
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Gabija
Gabija

Šiauliai, Lithuania



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