Life

It is no more the life I dreamt of

It has no sense to be called life

Is it because of people's longing?

Is it because of a wrong decision?

Neither but it is because of an unforgetable past I have

Is it that bad to be unforgetable?

No, but it can challenge a horror movie in its creep

Can't you go further without it?

I might but only if its actors are dead

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"Is it because of people's longing?
Is it because of a wrong decision?
Neither but it is because of an unforgetable past I have"
Nice flow of thoughts and questions. I like the above lines. I tell people. Past is gone. Learn from the past and move on. Too late to seek real forgiveness after deed is done. Nice poetry. Made me think this afternoon. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lakki]

Glad you have got such a reaction. Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Mohamed Boutaib]

I like such poems, with lots of question, this was a good one, and I liked that last verse very much :D

[lakki]

Thank you so much!

[ron]

Interesting poem. I love the back and forth in this one, it flows very smoothly.

[lakki]

Glad you like it, thank you for the review.

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Gurleen Saluja]

A great thought with a good amount of sarcasm..

[lakki]

Thank you for your review. :)