Marshmallow World

It's a marshmallow world
With a thick, white, cover
Hiding the truth
With a sugar-coat
Oh, oh, oh
It's a marshmallow world!

 

It's a marshmallow world
Where we are melted
And burned
Until we're dripping
White tears of goop
Oh, oh, oh
It's a marshmallow world!

 

It's a marshmallow world
Where we're squished
Between the graham crackers
Having no escape
Oh, oh, oh
It's a marshmallow world!

 

It's a marshmallow world
Where sometimes we get burned
And then thrown into the trash
Because it tastes good no more
Oh, oh, oh
It's a marshmallow world!

 

It's a marshmallow world
Where being compared
With the chocolate
It means you're not as good
Oh, oh, oh
It's a marshmallow world!

 

Oh, oh, oh
It's a marshmallow world...
Oh, oh, oh
How I wish it weren't...
 

Author's Note

*sweatdrop and nervous laugh* Sorry if I made marshmallows sound evil! I love this poem!

Reviews

[Maria C. Donado]

-_- I can't see the reviews. If you're going to review this, please send me a message with the review on it -sob- stupid computer

[Clockwork]

It is an interesting idea. This poem contains one of the most interesting and unique extended metaphors I have ever read. You know, I think you are right, it is a marshmallow world.