Bachellors status renewed

Bachellors status renewed

A Poem by DTRUth

I would like to thank of her as thee cosmic waves of  sunshine that gleam from heavens moon

A beautiful daydream that ended 2 soon

A distant whisper heard from across the room

Pssss,pssss girl u know im talkin 2 u

Images of serinity and lust pierce my mind

i said i wud treat the next one right

well at least i wont do the same things this time

lol i say to myself

 I guess its the animal side of me that wants to explore

or should i blame it on my heart that searches for nuture just to indure

so let me ask you a question

 is it lust at first sight

or beauty in a new light

Or maybe its the time you think

 ooh wee i'll tear dat a*s up

or dat second glimpse

when u notice them lips, thighs, eyes, or how those hips twists

 Yeah my brother i'll have 2 admit most girls will get a

"God Damn"

But im lookin for the one that make me say 

"all s**t"

So whether your my beautiful black Nubian goddess

or my sweet and sour Pocahantas

None of that really matters

Bcuz 2night you the main course on my

"Please you Platter"

© 2009 DTRUth


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Very good. i loved the word play, and i nodded my head in agreeement. although this poem comes from a male's point of view, i can def understand. i have def loved the idea of multiple men, and sometimes i have that as a cushion, so just in case one hurts me, i have another. and i def see a lot of good traits in so many men, it's hard to admire them.

my fav part:

So whether your my beautiful black Nubian goddess

or my sweet and sour Pocahantas

(very good descriptions of women, very creative)

great poem. can't wait to read more from you. stop by anytime, added you as my friend.

kena



Posted 15 Years Ago



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DTRUth
DTRUth

New Orleans, LA



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I'm a young black man tryna find my way in life. Im currrently in college chasing my dreams. I love all types of art and have and unkown passion for writing. Since when i really want to say thing m.. more..

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A Poem by DTRUth